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Job Application For Quality Assurance Manager

Job Application For Quality Assurance Manager jYky
Dear Mr. Walker, I am writing this letter to express interest in Quality Assurance Manager Position posted in University Notice Board. I strongly believe my qualifications fits on the position and beneficial to the company as well given my educational background and works experiences. Currently I am working as Project Engineer that is very relevant to the offered post. With this, I consistently improve my management skills by handling projects given tight schedule and high pressure on the task. During my studies I have studied various management subjects that will come in help performing the job. Moreover, I constantly perfect my management skills by taking various additional courses and being active on extra-curricular activities I am available for interview at your convenient time. You can contact me on the number provided below. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward of meeting you in the nearest future to discuss my qualification with you. Yours sincerely, Ythan Lani
Dear Mr. Walker,

I am writing this letter to express interest in Quality Assurance Manager Position posted in University Notice Board. I
strongly
believe my qualifications fits on the position and beneficial to the
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company
as well
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given
my educational background and works experiences.

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Currently
I am working as Project Engineer
that is
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very
relevant to the offered post. With this, I
consistently
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improve
my management
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skills
by handling projects
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given
tight schedule and high pressure on the task.

During my studies I have studied various management subjects that will
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come
in
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help
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performing
the job.
Moreover
, I
constantly
perfect my management
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skills
by taking various additional courses and being active on extra-curricular activities

I am available for interview at your convenient time. You can contact me on the number provided below.

Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward of meeting you in the nearest future to discuss my qualification with you.

Yours
sincerely
,

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IELTS letter Job Application For Quality Assurance Manager

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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