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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. RK0o
Dear sir/madam I am Lidabay and I am writing this letter regarding upcoming seminar held in Delhi, India on November. I work as a naturopathy physician in a wellness center. The content of this seminar provide me expert knowledge in my filed. As am live in Kerala and it will be a long journey for me. Let me explain what are the information am looking for. I know that seminar will be conduct on the November, but am not sure about the exact date and duration. In your website not much information regarding the speakers. So it would be great to know about dignitaries and their field of expertise. Also an searching for inexpensive accommodation close to venue. It could be great if u suggest some places. Would you kindly provide me detailed information all the mentioned areas? Using this valuable information I could plan my trip at the earliest. Thank you for your consideration in advance. Yours faithfully,
Dear sir/madam

I am
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Lidabay and
I am writing this letter regarding upcoming seminar held in Delhi, India on November. I work as a
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naturopathy
physician in a wellness center. The content of this seminar provide me expert knowledge in my filed.

As am
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live
in Kerala and it will be a long journey for me.
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Let
me
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explain
what are the
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information
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am
looking for. I know that seminar will be conduct on the November,
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but
am not sure about the exact date and duration. In your website not much
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information
regarding the speakers.
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So
it would be great to know about dignitaries and their field of expertise.
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Also
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an
searching for inexpensive accommodation close to venue. It could be great if u suggest
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some
places.

Would you kindly provide me detailed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
all the mentioned areas? Using this valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
I could plan my trip at the earliest.

Thank you for your consideration in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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