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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v.3

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v. 3 knEd

Dear Sir or Madam, With you respect, I would like to draw your attention to the incorrect details about my town mentioned in one of the columns of your travel weekly, The Wanderer. I am big fan of this magazine and eagerly wait every week for its new edition as it gives me an insight about various places, cuisines and ethnicities through its various columns. I have been reading this magazine since many years. However, I would like to point out an incorrect piece of information published in last week's issue of the magazine. The article is titled 'Into the Temples', and talks about the holy city of Varanasi and its famous and ancient temples. The article states that the city is located on the banks of river Yamuna. I would like to point out that the city is not located on the banks of Yamuna, instead it is located on the banks of rives Ganges. I hope to hear back from you. Yours sincerely. Somya

Dear Sir or Madam,

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details
 about my town mentioned in one of the columns of your travel weekly, The Wanderer.

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big
 fan of this magazine and eagerly
 wait every week for its new edition as it gives me an insight about various places, cuisines and ethnicities through its various columns. I have been reading this magazine since This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years. However
, I would like to point out an incorrect piece of information published in last week's issue of the magazine.

The article is titled
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famous
 and ancient temples. The article states that the city is located
 on the banks of river Possible spelling mistake found.FaunaYamahaLaminaSaunaRamonaLacuna
Yamuna
. I would like to point out that the city is not located on the banks of Possible spelling mistake found.FaunaYamahaLaminaSaunaRamonaLacuna
Yamuna
, instead
 it is located
 on the banks of rives Ganges.

I hope to hear back from you.

Yours sincerely
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Somya

IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v. 3

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

165 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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