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You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend suggest when and where you could meet your friend next

You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend suggest when and where you could meet your friend next rEn6
Dear Smith, Hope you are keeping well and kids are fine. Thank you for giving me a enjoyable visit to your new home in the last weekend. You are new home is a dream home for everyone. It is not only located in the quiet surrounding which I liked most but also very easy to reachable there through public transportation. Apart from it, bedroom and kids room with attached bathrooms at upstairs area is a unique feature of your home. Hall and kitchen are occupied with latest home appliances. Needless to say every facilities are appreciable. The mini theater room was giving me the feeling of the real enjoyment of big cinema. Moreover, I spent unforgettable moments with your sweet and friendly children while playing with them in the beautiful garden. The lunch was also mouth watering. I would like to invite you on next month May 15 at my home to celebrate my 4th weeding anniversary. You must have to attend this get together with all family members to make my anniversary a memorable with my near and dear ones. I look forward to seeing you soon. Warm wishes, David
Dear Smith,

Hope you are keeping well and kids are fine. Thank you for giving me
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
enjoyable visit to your new home in the last weekend.

You are new home is a dream home for everyone. It is not
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only
located in the quiet surrounding which I liked most
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but
also
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very
easy to reachable there through public transportation. Apart from it, bedroom and kids room with attached bathrooms at upstairs area is a unique feature of your home. Hall and kitchen
are occupied
with
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latest
home appliances. Needless to say every
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facilities
are appreciable.

The mini theater room was giving me the feeling of the real enjoyment of
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big
cinema.
Moreover
, I spent unforgettable moments with your sweet and friendly children while playing with them in the
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beautiful
garden. The lunch was
also
mouth watering.

I would like to invite you on
next
month May 15 at my home to celebrate my 4th weeding anniversary. You
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must
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have to
attend this
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get
together with all family members to
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make
my anniversary a memorable with my near and dear ones.

I look forward to seeing you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Warm wishes, David

IELTS letter You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend suggest when and where you could meet your friend next

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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