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You lost something on the bus and called customer service for help. You were unhappy with their response. Write a letter to the manager of the bus agency

You lost something on the bus and called customer service for help. You were unhappy with their response. Write a letter to the manager of the bus agency D537
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I had lost my documents in your bus number bearing MG05U 1449 while travelling from Guwahati to shillong for my interview on 21st of August. My seat number was 45. Documents was kept in blue file. Inside the file it contains important documents of mine like original school certificates, College degrees and date of birth certificate. I needed it urgently because I have to sit for my interview on 27th of August. Hope you will understand my situation. Let me explain you my situation. When I realized that I left my documents inside your bus, immediately I grabbed my phone and rang to customer service. But I did not get good responses from the customer service, besides explaining my urgency. They are not willing to send the courier on time. Giving excuses for some other works and wanted to delay for 3days which is not quite favorable for me to wait. Would you kindly do speed post of my documents on this address, Ms. Nanuka Thapa, Post office Assam Lingzey, East Sikkim, Pin code 73001, before 23rd of August. So that I can get a chance to sit for my job interview. Also my contact number is 6000811921. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Ms. Nanuka Thapa
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
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you know that I had lost my
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documents
in your bus number bearing MG05U 1449 while travelling from Guwahati to
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shillong
for my interview on 21st of August. My seat number was 45.
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Documents
was
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kept
in blue file. Inside the file it contains
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important
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documents
of mine like original school certificates, College degrees and date of birth certificate. I needed it
urgently
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because
I
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have to
sit for my interview on 27th of August. Hope you will understand my situation.

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Let
me
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explain
you my situation. When I realized that I
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left
my
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documents
inside your bus, immediately I grabbed my phone and rang to customer service.
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But
I did not
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get
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good
responses from the customer service,
besides
explaining my urgency. They are not willing to
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send
the courier on time. Giving excuses for
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some
other works and wanted to delay for 3days which is not quite favorable for me to wait.

Would you kindly do speed post of my
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documents
on this address, Ms.
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Nanuka
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Thapa
, Post office Assam
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Lingzey
, East Sikkim, Pin code 73001,
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before
23rd of August.
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So
that I can
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get
a chance to sit for my job interview.
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Also
my contact number is 6000811921.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ms.
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Nanuka
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Thapa
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IELTS letter You lost something on the bus and called customer service for help. You were unhappy with their response. Write a letter to the manager of the bus agency

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  American English
7 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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