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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:  Introduce yourself –  Explain what the problem is –  Suggest solutions to the problem –

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:  Introduce yourself –  Explain what the problem is –  Suggest solutions to the problem – oyn3
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the ongoing construction work in our locality. My name is Khurram Khan and I am a resident of Mamzar Society on 13th Dubai Street. I have been living in this colony for past 10 years. For the past few days, a lot of road repair work has been going on and it continues till the late night. However, the society residents beforehand were clearly informed that the road repair work will commence only in daytime, precisely from 11: 00 am – 04: 00 pm which unfortunately never happened. To make matter worse, the repair work continued even on a weekend. I feel that the ideal solution should be to start the shift 2 hours earlier then it is planned presently. This will not only solve the disturbing issue being faced every day by local community but will mitigate the consumption of access lighting required to carry out this task in nighttime. I hope that council would give due consideration to my suggestion. Yours faithfully Khurram Khan
Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the ongoing construction
work
in our locality. My name is
Khurram
Khan and
I am a resident of
Mamzar
Society on 13th Dubai Street. I have been living in this colony for past 10 years.

For the past few days,
a lot of
road repair
work
has been going on and it continues till the late night.
However
, the society residents beforehand were
clearly
informed that the road repair
work
will commence
only
in daytime,
precisely
from 11: 00 am
04: 00 pm which unfortunately never happened. To
make
matter worse, the repair
work
continued even on a weekend.

I feel that the ideal solution should be to
start
the shift 2 hours earlier then it
is planned
presently
. This will not
only
solve the disturbing issue
being faced
every day by local community
but
will mitigate the consumption of access lighting required to carry out this task in nighttime.

I hope that council would give due consideration to my suggestion.

Yours
faithfully


Khurram
Khan
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IELTS letter Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:  Introduce yourself –  Explain what the problem is –  Suggest solutions to the problem –

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  American English
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175 words
6.0
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