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Write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at the work. Apologise for missing the meeting Explain what happened Say what will you do to compensate

Write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at the work. Apologise for missing the meeting Explain what happened Say what will you do to compensate WBGb
Dear Sir, I am writing to apologize for not attending the meeting which was organized recently. I knew the importance of the meeting very well, but owing to unavoidable circumstances I was not able to present at the meeting. Actually, I got an accident yesterday, while I was driving the car. Though fortunately, I did not have any serious injuries, doctor instructed to be hospitalized until I get clear reports. Therefore, I could not attend the meeting, even though I wanted to be a part of it. I have talked with Mr Patel who was there throughout the meeting. I have reviewed the meeting and have taken minutes of the meeting in order to speed up myself with the upcoming project and I can give my level best efforts to make our vision successful. I apologise again for yesterday’s absence at the meeting. I hope you will understand my situation and will be assured with my dedication towards the work in future. Your’s sincerely, Hetal Hinglajia
Dear Sir,

I am writing to apologize for not attending the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
which
was organized
recently. I knew the importance of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
owing to unavoidable circumstances I was not able to present at the meeting.

Actually, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
an accident yesterday, while I was driving the car. Though
fortunately
, I did not have any serious injuries, doctor instructed to
be hospitalized
until I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
reports.
Therefore
, I could not attend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
,
even though
I wanted to be a part of it.

I have talked with Mr Patel who was there throughout the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
. I have reviewed the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
and have taken minutes of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
speed up
myself with the upcoming project and I can give my
A determiner is probably missing here: "level the best".
level best
efforts to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
our vision successful.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Do not mix variants of the same word ('apologise' and 'apologize') within a single text.
apologise
again for yesterday’s absence at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you will understand my situation and will
be assured
with my dedication towards the work
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your’s
sincerely
,

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Hetal
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Hinglajia
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at the work. Apologise for missing the meeting Explain what happened Say what will you do to compensate

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7 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
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