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you would like to participate in a work- related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask the detail information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

you would like to participate in a work- related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask the detail information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. Bqx5
Dear Sir, I am David Smith, from Gujarat state which is one of the provinces of India. The purpose of writing this letter to ask some information regards of the upcoming seminar in Canada. Being a Mechanical Engineer this seminar will provide huge information regards of my research area. As I am doing my PHD degree now in the same field, it will be very helpful for me. It would be great if you can provide the in depth information regards of the seminar such as dates and activities and topic coverage. If you provide so, I can plan the air tickets accordingly. Furthermore, the nation as well as city will new to me and thus, if as a in charge do you have authority to provide the temporary accommodation? If yes, then let me know that things also. As I am very excited to attend this seminar; however, the cost is matter to me. Therefore, it would be great if you could provide me the overall approximate expense of stay, activity and entrance charge of the seminar. Waiting for your reply. Yours Sincerely, David Smith.
Dear Sir, I am David Smith, from Gujarat state which is one of the provinces of India. The purpose of writing this letter to ask
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information regards of the upcoming
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seminar
in Canada.

Being a Mechanical Engineer this
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seminar
will
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provide
huge information regards of my research area. As I am doing my
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PHD
degree
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now
in the same field, it will be
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very
helpful for me. It would be great if you can
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provide
the in depth information regards of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
such as dates and activities and topic coverage. If you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provide
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so
, I can plan the air tickets
accordingly
.
Furthermore
, the nation
as well
as city will new to me and
thus
, if as
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a
in charge do you have authority to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provide
the temporary accommodation? If yes, then
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let
me know that things
also
.

As I am
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very
excited to attend this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
;
however
, the cost is matter to me.
Therefore
, it would be great if you could
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
provide
me the
overall
approximate expense of stay, activity and entrance charge of the seminar.

Waiting for your reply.

Yours
Sincerely
,

David Smith.
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IELTS letter you would like to participate in a work- related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask the detail information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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