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You live in an area where local council has made some changes to regulations you believe these changes are not good for resident write a letter to a councilor in your letter introduce yourself describe the problem say what you think the council should do about the situation

You live in an area where local council has made some changes to regulations you believe these changes are not good for resident write a letter to a councilor in your letter introduce yourself describe the problem say what you think the council should do about the situation JolEE
Dear prakash, I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction with the new rules change that are implemented in our community. My name is alash sanjel, I am from british columbia. whereas, I have 3years of experience working as a chef in royal crown plaza. Well, Nowadays nation implemented a new rules that has been effective in our community. moreover, due to the lack of road networks people are facing different problem. However, nation plan to reconstruct the new road and design with big space individuals are facing difficulties. Thus, because of big machine sound and bad environment it affect my study very badly. As a solution, I would like to request you please don't use more equipment similarly, which disturb our children. in addition, please use worker to do work near the scholars house. I would really appreciate if you analyse the change and put interest above all. Yours faithfully, Alash sanjel
Dear
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prakash
, I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction with the new
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rules
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change
that
are implemented
in our community. My name is
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alash
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sanjel
, I am from
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british columbia
.
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whereas
, I have 3years of experience working as a chef in royal crown plaza. Well, Nowadays nation implemented a new
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rules
that has been effective in our community.
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moreover
, due to the lack of road networks
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people
are facing
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different
problem.
However
, nation plan to reconstruct the new road and design with
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big
space individuals are facing difficulties.
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machine sound and
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environment it
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affect
my study
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. As a solution, I would like to request you
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don't
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use
more equipment
similarly
, which disturb our children.
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in
addition,
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use
worker to do work near the scholars
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house
. I would
really
appreciate if you
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the
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change
and put interest
above all
. Yours
faithfully
,
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Alash
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sanjel
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IELTS letter You live in an area where local council has made some changes to regulations you believe these changes are not good for resident write a letter to a councilor in your letter introduce yourself describe the problem say what you think the council should do about the situation

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