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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take KwnON
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Mustufa. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction behaviour towards your restaurant and I must say I feel regret coming to your restaurant. Recently, I have been promoted from Team leader to Team Manager in my company Abstergo. And I genuinely thought that I would bring my family to your Khana restaurant and hoping we will have a great time but it was an unpleasant environment. Firstly, when we arrived and sat at a table, there was no waiter waiting for us and we wait for few minutes but then no one arrived. I had to call the waiter still no answer but then I had to step up and talked to the reception desk. This was the first time I felt annoyed. Secondly, the dish we ordered did not arrive and something else came on the scene. I thought they kept it by mistake but I was wrong and I felt irritated. But still, for the sake of my family, I did not spoke anything bad to a waiter and the waiter's behaviour was very gruesome. We had to wait half an hour for another order to appear. Please look after this situation and solve this matter as soon as possible. We arrive early in a good mood and we left in an unacceptable situation. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Mustufa Khokhawala.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
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Mustufa
. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
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behaviour
towards your restaurant and I
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must
say I feel regret coming to your restaurant.

Recently, I have
been promoted
from Team leader to Team Manager in my
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company
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Abstergo
. And I
genuinely
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thought
that I would bring my family to your
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Khana
restaurant and hoping we will have a great time
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but
it was an unpleasant environment.

Firstly
, when we arrived and sat at a table, there was no waiter waiting for
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us and
we wait for few minutes
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but
then no one arrived. I had to call the waiter
still
no answer
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but
then I had to step up and talked to the reception desk. This was the
first
time I felt annoyed.

Secondly
, the dish we ordered did not arrive and something else came on the scene. I
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thought
they
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kept
it by mistake
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but
I was
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wrong
and I felt irritated.
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But
still
, for the sake of my family, I did not
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spoke
anything
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bad
to a waiter and the waiter's
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behaviour
was
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very
gruesome. We had to wait half an hour for another order to appear.

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Please
look after this situation and solve this matter as
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soon
as possible. We arrive early in a
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good
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mood and
we
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left
in an unacceptable situation.

Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Mustufa
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Khokhawala
.

IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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  American English
9 paragraphs
234 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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