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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

dear, Yes, i woud like to participate in a work in seminar in other country. In my opinion, i like to recommend the safety seminar in the country to explore the things related to our safety, it a important part of our organization. If we aware the people in the way of our organization, it's good thing for us. Ithink we can aware the people on date of labour day because it's day of our country worker and we think this is good time for us. 05/05/2021 is the best day fir this seminar because every person will be free on this day, they will love to join our seminar. our program is to facilitate our community to aware safety first rule in any type of company. i think there is not a any fixed place or accommodation to give the to people of other country. we should go any where to teach the people, and i think in that way the cost of the our seminar is too much costlessly, in that way we are not worried about the expenses of our seminar.
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dear
,

Yes, i
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woud
like to participate in a work in
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seminar
in other country.

In my opinion,
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i
like to recommend the safety
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seminar
in the country to explore the things related to our safety, it
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a
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important
part of our organization. If
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we aware
the
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people
in the way of our organization, it's
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good
thing for us.
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Ithink
we
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can aware
the
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people
on date of
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labour day
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because
it's day of our country
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worker and
we
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think
this is
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good
time for us. 05/05/2021 is the best day fir this
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seminar
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because
every person will be free on this day, they will
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love
to
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join
our
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seminar
.
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our
program is to facilitate our community to aware safety
first
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rule
in any type of
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company
.
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i
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think
there is not
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a
any
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fixed
place or accommodation to give
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the to
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people
of other country.
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we
should go
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any where
to teach the
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people
, and
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i
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think
in that way the cost of
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the our
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seminar
is too much
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costlessly
, in that way we are not worried about the expenses of our
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seminar
.

IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
184 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.