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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

dear, Yes, i woud like to participate in a work in seminar in other country. In my opinion, i like to recommend the safety seminar in the country to explore the things related to our safety, it a important part of our organization. If we aware the people in the way of our organization, it's good thing for us. Ithink we can aware the people on date of labour day because it's day of our country worker and we think this is good time for us. 05/05/2021 is the best day fir this seminar because every person will be free on this day, they will love to join our seminar. our program is to facilitate our community to aware safety first rule in any type of company. i think there is not a any fixed place or accommodation to give the to people of other country. we should go any where to teach the people, and i think in that way the cost of the our seminar is too much costlessly, in that way we are not worried about the expenses of our seminar.

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seminar
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company
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fixed
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people
 of other country. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.We
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