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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

dear, Yes, i woud like to participate in a work in seminar in other country. In my opinion, i like to recommend the safety seminar in the country to explore the things related to our safety, it a important part of our organization. If we aware the people in the way of our organization, it's good thing for us. Ithink we can aware the people on date of labour day because it's day of our country worker and we think this is good time for us. 05/05/2021 is the best day fir this seminar because every person will be free on this day, they will love to join our seminar. our program is to facilitate our community to aware safety first rule in any type of company. i think there is not a any fixed place or accommodation to give the to people of other country. we should go any where to teach the people, and i think in that way the cost of the our seminar is too much costlessly, in that way we are not worried about the expenses of our seminar.
dear
,

Yes, i
woud
like to participate in a work in
seminar
in other country.

In my opinion,
i
like to recommend the safety
seminar
in the country to explore the things related to our safety, it
a
important
part of our organization. If
we aware
the
people
in the way of our organization, it's
good
thing for us.
Ithink
we
can aware
the
people
on date of
labour day
because
it's day of our country
worker and
we
think
this is
good
time for us. 05/05/2021 is the best day fir this
seminar
because
every person will be free on this day, they will
love
to
join
our
seminar
.
our
program is to facilitate our community to aware safety
first
rule
in any type of
company
.
i
think
there is not
a
any
fixed
place or accommodation to give
the to
people
of other country.
we
should go
any where
to teach the
people
, and
i
think
in that way the cost of
the our
seminar
is too much
costlessly
, in that way we are not worried about the expenses of our
seminar
.
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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