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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear sir My name is a sim and I am working as an area manager in the food industry and I saw your advertisement for the new course in the newspaper. I am interested in the course. Although, I never studied middle level computer course due to my work demand I learned myself most of the computer basics from the help of youtube. futhermore, i completed my graduation in 2018 and due to my hard work i am working in Multinational company but for the further growth i have to complete computer course as per the requirement of the position i want to apply. although, i am always interested in the computer. i already know the computer basic for example Microsoft word, excel, powerpoint but if you want, you can arrange a test and on the basis of test results you can give your decision for my admission. if you want to give me a chance for the studying then you can reply me the details for the course and test if you want to arrange. i am looking forward for your positive response. your sincerely sim

Dear sir

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sim and
 I am working as an area manager in the food industry and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 your advertisement for the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 in the newspaper. I am interested
 in the course.

Although, I never studied middle level computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 due to my work demand I learned myself most of the computer basics from the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of The official name of this popular video platform is spelled with a capital “T”.YouTube
youtube
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Futhermore
futhermore
, Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 completed my graduation in 2018 and due to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am working in Multinational This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 for the further
 growth Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 complete computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 as per the requirement of the position Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 to apply. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Although
although
, Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am always interested in the computer.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.I
i
 already know the computer basic for example
Did you mean the proper noun “Microsoft Word” (= Microsoft product)?Microsoft Word
Microsoft word
, excel, Did you mean “PowerPoint” (= Microsoft presentation software)?PowerPoint
powerpoint
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
, you can arrange a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 and on the basis of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 results you can give your decision for my admission.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.If
if
 you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 to give me a chance for the studying then you can reply me the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 if you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 to arrange.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.I
i
 am looking forward for your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Your
your
sincerely


sim