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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear sir My name is a sim and I am working as an area manager in the food industry and I saw your advertisement for the new course in the newspaper. I am interested in the course. Although, I never studied middle level computer course due to my work demand I learned myself most of the computer basics from the help of youtube. futhermore, i completed my graduation in 2018 and due to my hard work i am working in Multinational company but for the further growth i have to complete computer course as per the requirement of the position i want to apply. although, i am always interested in the computer. i already know the computer basic for example Microsoft word, excel, powerpoint but if you want, you can arrange a test and on the basis of test results you can give your decision for my admission. if you want to give me a chance for the studying then you can reply me the details for the course and test if you want to arrange. i am looking forward for your positive response. your sincerely sim
Dear sir

My name is a
sim and
I am working as an area manager in the food industry and I
saw
your advertisement for the new
course
in the newspaper. I
am interested
in the course.

Although, I never studied middle level computer
course
due to my work demand I learned myself most of the computer basics from the
help
of
youtube
.
futhermore
,
i
completed my graduation in 2018 and due to my
hard
work
i
am working in Multinational
company
but
for the
further
growth
i
have to
complete computer
course
as per the requirement of the position
i
want
to apply.
although
,
i
am always interested in the computer.

i
already know the computer basic
for example
Microsoft word
, excel,
powerpoint
but
if you
want
, you can arrange a
test
and on the basis of
test
results you can give your decision for my admission.

if
you
want
to give me a chance for the studying then you can reply me the
details
for the
course
and
test
if you
want
to arrange.

i
am looking forward for your
positive
response.

your
sincerely


sim
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IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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