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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear neighbor I am writing this letter in response to your complaint about the noise from my flat. firstly, I want to apologize for the inconvenience from my side. I recently moved into the flat and I realized that all the kitchen cabinets were broken and we were assembling new cabinets. Me and my husband works in the morning 9 to 5 so we did most of the work in the evening and forgot that our kitchen is next to your bedroom. but i am very sorry for the inconvenience and stop working for now in the evening. However we hire a construction worker for 2 days that is this weekend and they are coming to work in the morning so i hope that will not bother you so much and we did most by ourself so they are just to finalise it. i hope you will understand my situation and forgive us for the noise. we will be more careful from the next time. your sincerely sim
Dear neighbor

I am writing this letter in response to your complaint about the noise from my flat.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
firstly
, I want to apologize for the inconvenience from my side.

I recently
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moved
into the flat and I realized that all the kitchen cabinets were
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
broken and
we were assembling new cabinets.
When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form “I” is required here.
Me
and my husband works in the morning 9 to 5
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so
we did most of the work in the evening and forgot that our kitchen is
next
to your bedroom.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
but
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am
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very
sorry for the inconvenience and
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stop
working for
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now
in the evening.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
we hire a construction worker for 2 days
that is
this
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
weekend and
they are coming to work in the morning
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so
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
hope that will not bother you
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so
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
much and
we did most by ourself
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so
they are
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just
to
Possible spelling mistake. ‘finalise’ is British English.
finalise
it.
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
hope you will understand my situation and forgive us for the noise.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
we
will be more careful from the
next
time.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
your
sincerely


sim

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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