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Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends. He/she has informed you that they will be travelling near to your home town on business in a few months' time. Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you. In your letter • say how pleased you are to hear from them • invite them to stay with you • tell them about your ideas of how you could spend the time together

Dear Sam I hope you are great. l was out the moon to hear that you are travelling near to my home town for some office works in little months time. I am exicted to meet where you as 'soon as possible, last holidays were amazing just because we met there, i will never forget that trip. I understand that you are coming for your Business project but from your work place my house is just 5 km. I really appreciate, if you come to meet my family and friends and stay with us. As you are coming for a month and you are free on last week of your work, I want you to stay on that time. I had planned so many things, we will go to the in disney Park which is very famous in my town and will have dinner with family. we will go for a movie one of my favorite actors film is relising in next two months, i am sure that you will enjoy here alot, I am looking forward to heave from you. Best Regards Jay
Dear Sam

I hope you are great.
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l
was out the moon to hear that you are travelling near to my
The word “hometown” is normally spelled as one word.
home town
for
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some
office works in
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little
months time. I am
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exicted
to
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meet
where you as '
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soon
as possible, last holidays were amazing
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just
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because
we met there,
Did you mean “I”?
i
will never forget that trip.

I understand that you are coming for your Business project
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but
from your work place my
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house
is
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just
5 km.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
really
appreciate, if you
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come
to
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meet
my family and friends and stay with us. As you are coming for a
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
month and
you are free on last week of your work, I want you to stay on that time.

I had planned
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so
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many
things, we will go to the in
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disney
Park which is
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very
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famous
in my town and will have dinner with family.
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we
will go for a movie one of my favorite actors film is
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relising
in
next
two months,
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am sure that you will enjoy here
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alot
, I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure ‘look + forward + to + verb’, the verb ‘to’ is used with the gerund: “to heaving”.
to heave
from you.

Best Regards

Jay

IELTS letter Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends. He/she has informed you that they will be travelling near to your home town on business in a few months' time. Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you. In your letter • say how pleased you are to hear from them • invite them to stay with you • tell them about your ideas of how you could spend the time together

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  American English
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183 words
6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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