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Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends. He/she has informed you that they will be travelling near to your home town on business in a few months' time. Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you. In your letter • say how pleased you are to hear from them • invite them to stay with you • tell them about your ideas of how you could spend the time together

Dear Sam I hope you are great. l was out the moon to hear that you are travelling near to my home town for some office works in little months time. I am exicted to meet where you as 'soon as possible, last holidays were amazing just because we met there, i will never forget that trip. I understand that you are coming for your Business project but from your work place my house is just 5 km. I really appreciate, if you come to meet my family and friends and stay with us. As you are coming for a month and you are free on last week of your work, I want you to stay on that time. I had planned so many things, we will go to the in disney Park which is very famous in my town and will have dinner with family. we will go for a movie one of my favorite actors film is relising in next two months, i am sure that you will enjoy here alot, I am looking forward to heave from you. Best Regards Jay
Dear Sam

I hope you are great.
l
was out the moon to hear that you are travelling near to my
home town
for
some
office works in
little
months time. I am
exicted
to
meet
where you as '
soon
as possible, last holidays were amazing
just
because
we met there,
i
will never forget that trip.

I understand that you are coming for your Business project
but
from your work place my
house
is
just
5 km.
I
really
appreciate, if you
come
to
meet
my family and friends and stay with us. As you are coming for a
month and
you are free on last week of your work, I want you to stay on that time.

I had planned
so
many
things, we will go to the in
disney
Park which is
very
famous
in my town and will have dinner with family.
we
will go for a movie one of my favorite actors film is
relising
in
next
two months,
i
am sure that you will enjoy here
alot
, I am looking forward
to heave
from you.

Best Regards

Jay
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IELTS letter Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends. He/she has informed you that they will be travelling near to your home town on business in a few months' time. Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you. In your letter • say how pleased you are to hear from them • invite them to stay with you • tell them about your ideas of how you could spend the time together

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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