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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear Sir, I am writing to regard this that it’s a flabbergasted news for me when I read that your academy is going to start a new computer course. Actually, I am interested in computer course which will assist me in my further studied. However, I studied some computing level books which support me to understand how to work on computer apparently, it's not sufficient for me to only rely up to this. As you know this 21st century is the scientific and technology world where computer is now our paramount importance in our life that we have to learn and develop some new techniques in our self to survive in this universe. As for this purpose, I need admission in your school. I ensure you that I will go and above beyond to show my optimal performance to achieve my goal. It's my humble request to you that allow me to register myself for this assignment Your authorization will take me over the moon, Kindly Regards, Yours Sincerely,
Dear Sir,

I am writing to regard this that it’s
a flabbergasted news
for me when I read that your academy is going to
start
a new computer course.

Actually, I
am interested
in computer course which will assist me in my
further
studied.
However
, I studied
some
computing level books which support me to understand how to work on computer
apparently
, it's not sufficient for me to
only
rely
up to this. As you know this 21st century is the scientific and technology world where computer is
now
our paramount importance in our life that we
have to
learn and develop
some
new techniques in our self to survive in this universe.

As for this purpose, I need admission in your school. I ensure you that I will go and above beyond to
show
my optimal performance to achieve my goal.

It's my humble request to you that
allow
me to register myself for this assignment

Your authorization will take me over the moon,

Kindly Regards,

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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