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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation itself is fine, my housemate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started about three months ago when my housemate first moved in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old housemate was extremely considerate. My current housemate, however, stays up almost all night and plays incessantly loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep properly and therefore cannot concentrate on my studies. Would you kindly transfer me or my housemate to another room? I would much prefer to live with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others. As long as it is quiet, I don’t mind whom I live with. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Sanket
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I am unhappy with my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
living conditions. While the accommodation itself is fine, my housemate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation
Possible spelling mistake. ‘favourably’ is British English.
favourably
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
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explain
my situation. The trouble
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
about three months ago when my housemate
first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
housemate was
extremely
considerate. My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
housemate,
however
, stays up almost all night and plays
incessantly
loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep
properly
and
therefore
cannot concentrate on my studies.

Would you kindly transfer me or my housemate to another room? I would much prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others. As long as it is quiet, I don’t mind whom I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Sanket

IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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