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you would like to participate in a work-relate seminar in another country . Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for the detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

you would like to participate in a work-relate seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for the detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. jNbX
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Rona, an ICU nurse at the hospital, located in the provience of Pans in the Philippines. I have learned from a collague that you will conduct an Electro Training in Singapore. I am writing to ask for some specific information regarding the specific information regarding the seminar schedule, program details, accomodation arrangement and the cost. Firstly, with regards to dates and time, what will be the seminar schedule and what time would it begin an end each day? Secondly, please notify me of the topics and speakers of the program. I am wondering if there is any special consideration for the registered nurses who will be attending the seminar? And finally, I would also like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation be arrange by you or should an individual be responsible for that? What would be the approximate cost to attend and successfully finish the seminar? I am very much intrested in attending the seminar and your reply would help me plan for it in advance. So, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regaring my concerns. Yours faithfully, Rona
Dear Sir or Madam, I am
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Rona
, an ICU nurse at the hospital, located in the
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provience
of Pans in the Philippines. I have learned from a
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collague
that you will conduct an
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Electro
Training in Singapore. I am writing to
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some
specific information regarding the specific information regarding the
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schedule, program
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details
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accomodation
arrangement and the cost.
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dates and time, what will be the
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schedule and what time would it
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begin
an
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each day?
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,
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notify me of the topics and speakers of the program. I am wondering if there is any special consideration for the registered nurses who will be attending the
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seminar
? And
finally
, I would
also
like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation be
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arrange
by you or should an individual be responsible for that? What would be the approximate cost to attend and
successfully
finish the
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seminar
? I am
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intrested
in attending the
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seminar
and your reply would
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help
me plan for it in advance.
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So
, I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
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regaring
my concerns. Yours
faithfully
,
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Rona
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IELTS letter you would like to participate in a work-relate seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for the detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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