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IELTS writing exam task 1

IELTS writing exam task 1 dB36
Dear Mr. Han Happy new year! Long time no see. Today, I am writing this letter to let you know something about noise. As we know, where I live is a nice and quiet place. Recently, it has been so noisy every night. The reason is my neighbor Eddie had parties every night until 2 or 3am since last week, it sounds like that he invited a lot of friends to home, they sang, chatted and drank. The noise was very loud that made me can’t sleep well, sometimes I even insomnia. I tried to talk to him, but he didn’t listen to me. So could you please talk this problem to him and persuade him to keep quiet every night, especially on the weekday. If he still could not, I will move out there, because it affects my life seriously. Thank you so much! Best wishes. Krystal
Dear Mr. Han

Happy new year! Long time no
see
.
Today
, I am writing this letter to
let
you know something about noise. As we know
, where
I
live
is a nice and quiet place. Recently, it has been
so
noisy every night. The reason is my neighbor Eddie had parties every night until 2 or 3am since last week, it sounds like that he invited
a lot of
friends to home, they sang, chatted and drank. The noise was
very
loud that made me can’t sleep well,
sometimes
I even insomnia. I tried to talk to him,
but
he didn’t listen to me.

So
could you
please
talk this problem to him and persuade him to
keep
quiet every night,
especially
on the weekday. If he
still
could not, I will
move
out there,
because
it affects my life
seriously
. Thank you
so
much!

Best wishes.

Krystal
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IELTS letter IELTS writing exam task 1

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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