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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties kpWd
Dear Emma, Thank you for agreeing to looking after our house while we are away. We have been looking forward to this holiday for quite some time now and it would give us great comfort to know that our dogs will be well cared for while we are away. We will be away from 13 March 2021 till 28 March 2021 and will be staying at the Protea Hotel in Umhlanga, Natal. You can contact me on my cell phone number, 0833994756, should you wish to speak to us. Alternatively, you can contact my husband, Ronald, on 0829414544. Please feel free to contact us if you have any questions or concerns. Please could you give our dogs fresh water each day, as well as 2 cups of rusks. Their water bowl is the green bowl and the food bowl is red. You will find both bowls in the kitchen near the basin. I would really appreciate it if you could also give them each a treat when you leave on the day. You will find their treats in the fridge, it is the bowl containing slices of sausage. I have also put a few plants in the kitchen basin. Could you kindly also water those plants every third day. We greatly appreciate your assistance in this matter. Yours faithfully, Mandy
Dear Emma,

Thank you for agreeing to looking after our
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while we are away. We have been looking forward to this holiday for quite
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and it would give us great comfort to know that our dogs will be well cared for while we are away.

We will be away from 13 March 2021 till 28 March 2021 and will be staying at the
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Protea
Hotel in
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Umhlanga
, Natal. You can contact me on my cell phone number, 0833994756, should you wish to speak to us.
Alternatively
, you can contact my husband, Ronald, on 0829414544.
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Please
feel free to contact us if you have any questions or concerns.

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Please
could you give our dogs fresh water each day,
as well
as
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2 cups
of rusks. Their water
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bowl
is the green
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bowl
and the food
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bowl
is red
. You will find both
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bowls
in the kitchen near the basin. I would
really
appreciate it if you could
also
give them each a treat when you
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leave
on the day. You will find their treats in the fridge, it is the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bowl
containing slices of sausage.

I have
also
put a few plants in the kitchen basin. Could you kindly
also
water those plants every third day.

We
greatly
appreciate your assistance in this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mandy
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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  American English
8 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
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