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Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people

Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people J9Y6
Dear Alka, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. My joy knew no bounds when I read that you are eager to know about the recent news story on Punjab National Bank scam, which is a now a hot trending topic here. Let me explain in more detail. The article is about the scam done by the officials of the Punjab National Bank. They collected huge deposits from its customers and they simply ran away. Many people deposited a lot of money and now not in a position to get back from it and it’s considered as the third most huge scam in the history of India, that’s why it catched so much attention from people. It is no exception to my family as well. My father deposited 3 lakh rupees, which he saved for my sister’s marriage. My mother and father are in tears from the time they heard about the news and I’m not able to control them. It’s compassionteof you, if you can come and give moral support to my parents as they like you a lot and I am sure your visit can change their mood. Hoping to see you soon! Yours lovingly, Ravi.
Dear
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Alka
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Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. My joy knew no bounds when I read that you are eager to know about the recent news story on Punjab National Bank scam, which is a
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me
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explain
in more detail. The article is about the scam done by the officials of the Punjab National Bank. They collected huge deposits from its
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customers and
they
simply
ran away.
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Many
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people
deposited
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a lot of
money and
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now
not in a position to
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get
back from it and it’s considered as the third most huge scam in the history of India, that’s why it
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catched
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so
much attention from
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people
.

It is no exception to my family
as well
. My father deposited 3 lakh rupees, which he saved for my sister’s marriage. My mother and father are in tears from the time they heard about the news and I’m not able to control them. It’s
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compassionteof
you, if you can
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come
and give moral support to my parents as they like you a
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lot and
I am sure your visit can
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change
their mood.

Hoping to
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see
you
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soon
!

Yours
lovingly
,

Ravi.

IELTS letter Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people

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204 words
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