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One of your friends has asked to be a partner in this new business. Write a letter to you friend. In your letter: Give your opinion of your friend’s idea Tell him whether you have decided to accept the offer Explain your reason for the decision

One of your friends has asked to be a partner in this new business. Write a letter to you friend. In your letter: Give your opinion of your friend’s idea Tell him whether you have decided to accept the offer Explain your reason for the decision p3ed

Dear Mark, Hope you’re doing good with health and prosperity. I’m writing this to inform you about my decision on our business proposal. Firstly, I was very much impressed on your business plan. Opening a café in Wilson street is definitely a good move, moreover I heard that there is no café with affordable prices around the street within 30km range. Certainly, this can be an added advantage to get succeed. I’m thankful for considering me as your business partner, after discussing with my family and friends I’m glad to join my hands with you and be a part of this wonderful business venture. As I know you from so long and your successful projects in past, I’m pretty sure that you have taken certain considerations to put this plan. From my side, I have also done some analysis and background work about the plan and extremely excited about the results. This is also one of the reasons to be part of your up-coming project. Looking forward to work with you soon and convey my best wishes to your family. Your friend Jack

Dear Mark,

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good
 with health and prosperity. I’m writing this to inform you about my decision on our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 proposal.

Firstly
, I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much impressed on your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 plan. Opening a café in Wilson street is definitely a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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move
, moreover
 I heard that there is no café with affordable prices around the street within Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "30 km"30 km
30km
 range. Certainly
, this can be an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 advantage to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 succeed.

I’m thankful for considering me as your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 partner, after discussing with my family and friends I’m glad to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 my hands with you and be a part of this wonderful You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 venture.

As I know you from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long and your successful projects Did you mean: "in the past"?in the past
in past
, I’m pretty sure that you have taken certain considerations to put this plan. From my side, I have also
 done This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 analysis and background work about the plan and extremely
 excited about the results. This is also
 one of the reasons to be part of your up-coming project.

Looking forward to work with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and convey my best wishes to your family.

Your friend

Jack