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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news.

You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news. 0PaO
Dear Tom, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and good spirit. I am writing this letter regarding my new job. Tcs offered me better opportunity so I grabbed it whole heartedly. Let me explain you why I took this step, Current institute is immensely successful in the software business more over I was getting a hike and better working hours. On the other hand they give there employee more freedom to express, I’m extremely joyfull regarding my decision. I am working as compliance officer, My job is to make successful working of team so that a project is finished in time bound manner, Because of new challenges every day Is a fulfilling experience. I am also planning to visit you next month. It has been a long time since we met in person. Nice lunch and reliving our nostalgic memories of college time would be a nice thing. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly
Dear Tom, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and
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good
spirit. I am writing this letter regarding my new job.
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Tcs
offered me better opportunity
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so
I grabbed it whole
heartedly
.
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Let
me
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explain
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you
why I took this step,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Current
institute is
immensely
successful in the software business more over I was getting a hike and better working hours.
On the other hand
they give there employee more freedom to express, I’m
extremely
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joyfull
regarding my decision.

I am working as compliance officer, My job is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
successful working of team
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that a project
is finished
in time bound manner,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of new challenges every day Is a fulfilling experience.

I am
also
planning to visit you
next
month. It has been a long time since we met in person. Nice lunch and reliving our nostalgic memories of college time would be a nice thing. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
lovingly

IELTS letter You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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