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You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday • Tell your friend about your birthday • Explain how much the visit would mean to you • Suggest that your friend to stays at your house for the visit.

You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday • Tell your friend about your birthday • Explain how much the visit would mean to you • Suggest that your friend to stays at your house for the visit. kAqN
Dear Joseph, Hope you and your family are doing well, I am writing this letter for invite you on my birthday at my home and if you remember my birthday is coming on 02nd April, So We ought been planned for my birthday celebration consequently, you ought to be presence on my birthday. You know what my parents, my brothers and even my friend wants to see you here on that day. Furthermore, selection of birthday theme is based on your favorite Indian concept and that will indeed surprise for you. However, you have to manage your schedule for the same and been here before the date. In addition, last time you came in India, you stayed in a hotel but, this time you ought to stay at my house that is decided by my family and me. Also, there is specific arrangement for your accommodation, food and other amenities based on your ideal activities. Therefore, please inform your schedule of arrival here, If there is a need any kind of information, please confirm with me. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Thank you, Yours Sincerely, Vishal A Vadhel
Dear Joseph,

Hope you and your family are doing well, I am writing this letter for invite you on my birthday at my home and if you remember my birthday is coming on 02nd April,
So
We ought
been planned
for my birthday celebration
consequently
, you ought to be presence on my birthday.

You know what my parents, my brothers and even my friend wants to
see
you here on that day.
Furthermore
, selection of birthday theme
is based
on your favorite Indian concept and that will
indeed
surprise for you.
However
, you
have to
manage your schedule for the same and been here
before
the date.

In addition
, last time you came in India, you stayed in a hotel
but
, this time you ought to stay at my
house
that
is decided
by my family and me.
Also
, there is specific arrangement for your accommodation, food and other amenities based on your ideal activities.
Therefore
,
please
inform your schedule of arrival here, If there is a need any kind of information,
please
confirm with me.

I look forward to hearing from you as
soon
as possible.

Thank you,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Vishal A
Vadhel
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IELTS letter You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday • Tell your friend about your birthday • Explain how much the visit would mean to you • Suggest that your friend to stays at your house for the visit.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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