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You are currently taking an evening course at a local community college. However, you are not happy with the course. Write a letter to the manager of the college. In your letter -- say which course you are taking explain what the problem is with the course suggest what the manager should do to improve the course

You are currently taking an evening course at a local community college. However, you are not happy with the course. Write a letter to the manager of the college. In your letter -- say which course you are taking explain what the problem is with the course suggest what the manager should do to improve the course o0gq
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the Economics course which I recently joined at St. Jude College. I joined this course with great interest and expectation, but it's not engaging me since the classes are irregular. I compared offerings from many other colleges, and finally, I decided to pursue the Economics course in your institute. Even though this college is far away from my home, I choose this college as I got the scholarship. I travel a long distance to attend the classes. But it's not conducted regularly. Either they are postponed or canceled for some reason. I have few suggestions to improve the situation. Consider announcing the change in schedule to students beforehand. Also, for the classes canceled, provide compensation classes during the same week. Otherwise, the staff tends to rush on the topic to complete it few days before exams, from students perspective it is quite hard to prepare for the exam. I hope you agree with my suggestion and consider taking the necessary action to improve the situation. Yours faithfully, Nakshatra
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the Economics course which I recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
at St. Jude College. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
this course with great interest and expectation,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it's not engaging me since the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
are irregular.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
compared offerings from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
other colleges, and
finally
, I decided to pursue the Economics course in your institute.
Even though
this college is far away from my home, I choose this college as I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the scholarship.

I travel a long distance to attend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
it's not conducted
regularly
. Either they
are postponed
or canceled for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reason.

I have few suggestions to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the situation. Consider announcing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in schedule to students beforehand.
Also
, for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
canceled, provide compensation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
during the same week.
Otherwise
, the staff tends to rush on the topic to complete it few days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
exams, from students perspective it is quite
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to prepare for the exam.

I hope you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with my suggestion and consider taking the necessary action to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the situation.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Nakshatra
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IELTS letter You are currently taking an evening course at a local community college. However, you are not happy with the course. Write a letter to the manager of the college. In your letter -- say which course you are taking explain what the problem is with the course suggest what the manager should do to improve the course

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  American English
8 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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