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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . , eoD7
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing with regard to the upcoming one month training program being organized by your company, of which I am one of the participants. I understand that you are looking for a participant to take on the role of social events’ organizer and I would like to express a keen interest for this position. To begin with, I would highly appreciate if you could let me know some details regarding the role. If you could kindly highlight the responsibilities that one is expected to undertake and if there are some specific qualities, you are looking for. Also, if there are any prerequisite qualifications that one must possess in order to be eligible. I would like to make a case for myself for the specified role. I have hands on experience in organizing successful events and seminars in my previous organizations. One such event helmed by me in my last company, was awarded the ‘best social event of the year’. I have also planned and executed similar events during my university days and have received numerous accolades for the same. Armed with excellent communication and planning skills, there is no doubt in my mind that I would make for an ideal candidate for the job. I would be greatly obliged if you could consider me for this role. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sheeba Hasan
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing with regard to the upcoming
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one month
training program
being organized
by your
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company
, of which I am one of the participants. I understand that you are looking for a participant to take on the role of social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events’
organizer and I would like to express a keen interest for this position.

To
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begin
with, I would
highly
appreciate if you could
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let
me know
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
regarding the role. If you could kindly highlight the responsibilities that one is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to undertake and if there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
specific qualities, you are looking for.
Also
, if there are any prerequisite qualifications that one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
possess in order to be eligible.

I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a case for myself for the specified role. I have hands on experience in organizing successful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
and seminars in my previous organizations. One such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
helmed by me in my last
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
,
was awarded
the ‘best social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
of the year’. I have
also
planned and executed similar
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
during my university days and have received numerous accolades for the same. Armed with excellent communication and planning
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, there is no doubt in my mind that I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
for an ideal candidate for the job. I would be
greatly
obliged if you could consider me for this role.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . ,

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6.0
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