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Write a letter to counsel regarding the issue of waste in the lake

Write a letter to counsel regarding the issue of waste in the lake laKb
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you about the worsening condition of a lake near my neighborhood. The lake used to be clean and fresh but is now heavily polluted with wastes discarded by visitors. I recommend the council to witness the present condition and take necessary action to clean and prevent pollution. Last week, when I visited the lake, I was shocked to see wastes like paper towels littered all over the place. When I went boating, I also noticed plastic water bottles floating on the surface. Although this lake and its surroundings were well-maintained for many years, now it has lost its charm. These days, during the weekends' many visit the lake, and it's always overcrowded. Everywhere the used plastic bottles and paper towels are thrown. The problem is the lack of waste bins at several places. I recommend the council to consider and arrange for the cleaning services at the earliest. Fortunately, we can prevent pollution by installing waste bins at various places convenient for the visitor to dispose of waste. I appreciate your immediate attention on this matter. Yours faithfully, Nakshatra
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the worsening condition of a
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lake
near my neighborhood. The
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lake
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used
to be clean and fresh
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but
is
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now
heavily
polluted with
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wastes
discarded by visitors. I recommend the council to witness the present condition and take necessary action to clean and
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prevent
pollution.

Last week, when I visited the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lake
, I
was shocked
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
like paper towels littered all over the place. When I went boating, I
also
noticed plastic water bottles floating on the surface. Although this
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lake
and its surroundings were well-maintained for
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many
years,
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now
it has lost its charm.

These days, during the weekends'
Possible agreement error. The noun visit seems to be countable; consider using: "many visits".
many visit
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lake
, and it's always overcrowded. Everywhere the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
plastic bottles and paper towels
are thrown
. The problem is the lack of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
bins at several places.

I recommend the council to consider and arrange for the cleaning services at the earliest.
Fortunately
, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
pollution by installing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
bins at various places convenient for the visitor to dispose of waste.

I appreciate your immediate attention on this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Nakshatra
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IELTS letter Write a letter to counsel regarding the issue of waste in the lake

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  American English
8 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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