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friend is going for camping holiday for first time this summer, he asked for your advice

friend is going for camping holiday for first time this summer, he asked for your advice P2dp
Dear aby, I hope you are doing well and finally got some time after haptic schedule. I just received your letter and read that you are planning for going on the cliffs of Oranmore. That's a great idea you will surely enjoy that as your group is pretty experienced and expertise in this type of recreational activity especially Clare and Fr. ben. There are so many of recreational activities involved like mountain climbing, trekking that you will get pumped up for whole month and it will also be added to your sweet and adventorous memories. Just have some precautionary measures like keep torch, ample food supplies, trekking accessories, compass and power bank in case your phone gets discharged. I know that when you will return from trip so you will have more pending tasks because of days you are taking off and you will feel lethargic all round trip but the rejuvenation worth more than these consequences. If its possible for you to make some changes so can you please count me in your plan as I am having 7 days leave remaining, I can utilize it by spending time with my best friend. Desperately waiting for your reply yours lovingly, Saarthi Pandey
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aby
, I hope you are doing well and
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received your letter and read that you are planning for going on the cliffs of
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. There are
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of recreational activities involved like mountain climbing, trekking that you will
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pumped up for whole month and it will
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torch, ample food supplies, trekking accessories, compass and power bank in case your phone
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discharged. I know that when you will return from trip
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of days you are taking off and you will feel lethargic all round trip
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the rejuvenation worth more than these consequences. If
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count me in your plan as I am having 7 days
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remaining, I can utilize it by spending time with my best friend.
Desperately
waiting for your reply

yours
lovingly
,
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Saarthi
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Pandey

IELTS letter friend is going for camping holiday for first time this summer, he asked for your advice

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5.0
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