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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop.

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop. PXwpX

Dear Mr. Savliya, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have internet to purchase grill sendwich machine at your shop and I had inquiry about the machine yesterday. I'm Namrata Sonani and I'm live in Sentosa heights which is not far from your shop. When I was visit your shop there were plenty of electrical equipment available and it was mesmerizing for me due to that I want to purchase the grill sendwhich machine and that time variety of brands available in the shop but I was interested in Borosil steel machine that was not available. I would request you to arrange this brand machine for me as soon as posible. It would be great if you could send me the price and some photo of the machine and it has what types of discount and warranty are available. If you will arrange the machine in next two days so, it would be beneficial for me because after two days I will not able to take the machine I am not at the city. Consequently, please you could be hold the machine for me. I will definitely collect it when I come back. I look forward for your prompt responce. Yours sincerly, Namrata Sonani.

Dear Mr. Possible spelling mistake found.SalivaSalina
Savliya
,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have internet to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 grill Possible spelling mistake found.sandwich
sendwich
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 at your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 and I had inquiry about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 yesterday.

I'm Possible spelling mistake found.NarmadaNarrateNamathInamorataAmrita
Namrata
Possible spelling mistake found.Sonali
Sonani
 and I'm This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in Possible spelling mistake found.SantosSenoraCentOSSantoshVentoseVentôse
Sentosa
 heights which is not far from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. When I was Consider using a past participle here: "visited".visited
visit
 your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of electrical equipment available and it was mesmerizing for me due to that I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 the grill Possible spelling mistake found.send which
sendwhich
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 and that time variety of brands available in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I was interested
 in Possible spelling mistake found.BorodinBroil
Borosil
 steel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 that was not available. I would request you to arrange this brand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 for me as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as Possible spelling mistake found.possible
posible
.

It would be great if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me the price and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 photo of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 and it has what types of discount and warranty are available.

If you Consider removing 'will'. (Usually, 'will' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless in the sense 'want to' or 'be willing to'.)arrange
will arrange
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 in next
 two days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, it would be beneficial for me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 after two days I will not able to take the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 I am not at the city. Consequently
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 you could be hold the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 for me. I will definitely collect it when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back.

I look forward for your prompt Possible spelling mistake found.responseres ponceresp once
responce
.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.sincerely
sincerly
, Possible spelling mistake found.NarmadaNarrateNamathInamorataAmrita
Namrata
Possible spelling mistake found.Sonali
Sonani
. 