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You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend and explain -why did you move -Describe the new apartment -Invite him/her to visit

You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend and explain -why did you move -Describe the new apartment -Invite him/her to visit GW2Mj
Dear NavjotI hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to the inform that I am moving Ludhiana to Chandigarh. I am working in the Staller as a programmer. You know that I am waiting my promotion very long time. Finally I got it. So I am planning to move there. Luckily I got a apartment which type I wanted to that. It has two bedrooms, a living room and a kitchen. It's is very beautiful apartment. Moreover it's located at my workplace to near. There are many faculties such as shopping mall, hospital, bus station bank etc. I will shift there next week. Why don't you came at my place next month. We celebrate your birthday there. I am sure you will like the place. we will visit all the places which are popping Chandigarh and we would recall all college memoriesYours lovingly Manvir.
Dear
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NavjotI
hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'inform' is correct. If 'inform' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the inform
that I am moving Ludhiana to Chandigarh. I am working in the
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Staller
as a programmer. You know that I am waiting my promotion
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very
long time.
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Finally
I
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got
it.
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So
I am planning to
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move
there. Luckily I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
apartment which type I wanted to that. It has two bedrooms, a living room and a kitchen.
Did you mean "It is"?
It's is
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
apartment.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Moreover
it's located at my workplace to near. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
faculties such as shopping mall, hospital, bus station bank etc. I will shift there
next
week. Why don't you came at my place
next
month. We celebrate your birthday there. I am sure you will like the place.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
we
will visit all the places which are popping
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Chandigarh and
we would recall all college
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memoriesYours
lovingly
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Manvir
.
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend and explain -why did you move -Describe the new apartment -Invite him/her to visit

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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