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Write a formal letter making a reservation of 120-150 words.

Write a formal letter making a reservation of 120-150 words. WGNlN
Dear Ms. Weatherby, As a follow-up to our recent phone conversation, I am writing to notify you that I would like to make a reservation for the meeting in the United Kingdom from 10 to 12 January. There will be four people and we will require two twin rooms in total. I'd appreciate it if you could provide us with a peaceful room with a gorgeous view. On the telephone, I mentioned that my close friend is a vegetarian. Therefore, I would like to ask the hotel restaurant department to prepare a vegetarian meal during my two-day stay at the hotel. I want to read some more information about the hotel, can you give me a brochure if the hotel has it? We will arrive at about 11 P. M and we have an early meeting the following morning. Would you mind leaving an iron and ironing board in the room? Furthermore, I have a promotional code. Please can you confirm that it is £95 per night with breakfast included? I look forward to hearing from you in due course. Yours sincerely Bao Ngoc.
Dear Ms.
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Weatherby
,

As a follow-up to our recent phone conversation, I am writing to notify you that I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a reservation for the meeting in the United Kingdom from 10 to 12 January.

There will be four
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
people and
we will require two twin rooms in total. I'd appreciate it if you could provide us with a peaceful room with a gorgeous view.

On the telephone, I mentioned that my close friend is a vegetarian.
Therefore
, I would like to ask the hotel restaurant department to prepare a vegetarian meal during my two-day stay at the hotel.

I want to read
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some
more information about the hotel, can you give me a brochure if the
A comma should precede the tag question (i.e., the yes/no-question at the end).
hotel
has it?

We will arrive at about 11 P.
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
M and
we have an early meeting the following morning. Would you mind leaving an iron and ironing board in the room?
Furthermore
, I have a promotional code.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
can you confirm that it is £95 per night with breakfast included?

I look forward to hearing from you in due course.

Yours
sincerely


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Bao
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Ngoc
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IELTS letter Write a formal letter making a reservation of 120-150 words.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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