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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. 2YKX
Dear Sir, I am Karan Patel live near by your shop. I am writing this letter regarding LED light which I am looking for since long time. Do you have in the stock? Diwali festival is coming afer 5 weeks and I want to decorate my house with this LED light as soon as possible. Can you please arrange LED light of 30ft long for my house as I have checked in your store it was not availble and I know you can do some thing. If possible can you check with you supplier and let me at earliest. Is it possible for you to check the prices for that light and please advice me once you received it how long you can hold that for me because few days I am not availble in town. I hope you understand my situation and give me the quick response. Yours faithfully, Karan Patel
Dear Sir,

I am
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Karan
Patel
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live
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
your shop. I am writing this letter regarding LED
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light
which I am looking for since long time. Do you have in the stock?

Diwali festival is coming
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afer
5 weeks and I want to decorate my
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house
with this LED
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light
as
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soon
as possible. Can you
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please
arrange LED
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light
of
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30ft
long for my
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house
as I have
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checked
in your store it was not
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availble
and I know you can do
Did you mean "something"?
some thing
. If possible can you
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check
with you supplier and
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let
me at earliest.

Is it possible for you to
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check
the prices for that
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light
and
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please
advice me once you received it how long you can hold that for me
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because
few days I am not
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availble
in town. I hope you understand my situation and give me the quick response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Karan
Patel
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IELTS letter You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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