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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. BGQp
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I would like to take part in the seminar in your country. Since this seminar covers topics related to my field of interest, it adds more value to my employment skills as well as benefit my organization. I hope you were the authorized in charge, and consider my request favorably. Let me explain my situation in detail. In your country, my company wanted to expand its business operations and establish an additional branch. On this occasion, I would like to know detailed information about the scheduled dates and program agenda. While it would be new for me in that county, I have no idea if the event also provides accommodation for the attendees. If conducting such a knowledgeable event involves entry fees, I am ready to pay for it. Would you provide me the necessary information on the above aspects? I would much prefer to know as soon as possible. As long as I can get the data points by this coming Friday, I don't mind attending the seminar. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Naga.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in the seminar in your country. Since this seminar covers topics related to my field of interest, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
adds
more value to my employment
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
as well
as benefit my organization. I hope you were the authorized in charge, and consider my request
favorably
.

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Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my situation in detail. In your country, my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
wanted to expand its business operations and establish an additional branch. On this occasion, I would like to know detailed information about the scheduled dates and program agenda. While it would be new for me in that county, I have no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
if the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
also
provides accommodation for the attendees. If conducting such a knowledgeable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
involves entry fees, I am ready to pay for it.

Would you provide me the necessary information on the above aspects? I would much prefer to know as
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soon
as possible. As long as I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the data points by this coming Friday, I don't mind attending the seminar.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Naga
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.5
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