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A friend who live in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come Ask him about other times to visit

A friend who live in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come Ask him about other times to visit 5V2n
Dear Martin, I am writing to thank you for your invitation. It’s very kind of you but unfortunately, I won’t be able to make it due to my very hectic work schedule. Let me explain my situation in more detail. I’ve recently started a new job teaching English and I’ve been working around the clock. I don’t mean to complain; I’ve been enjoying it immensely. The school I’m working at is actually my old high school. It’s quite really interesting teaching with people who used to be my teachers. Could you let me know of another time you will be free? I would love to come to stay. I m interested in seeing your new house and meeting your wife. I’ll be free in the new year because of school holidays and I’ll also be free in winter. I’d certainly love to escape the cold to visit you then! Please let me know Yours faithfully, Adnan
Dear Martin,

I am writing to thank you for your invitation. It’s
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very
kind of you
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but
unfortunately, I won’t be able to
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make
it due to my
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very
hectic work schedule.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in more detail. I’ve recently
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started
a new job teaching English and I’ve been working around the clock. I don’t mean to complain; I’ve been enjoying it
immensely
. The school I’m working at is actually my
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old
high school. It’s quite
The extreme adjective for interesting is "fascinating", or "exciting".
really interesting
teaching with
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people
who
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used
to be my teachers.

Could you
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let
me know of another time you will be free? I would
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love
to
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come
to stay.
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I m
interested in seeing your new
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house
and meeting your wife.
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I
’ll be free in the new year
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because
of school holidays and I’ll
also
be free in winter.
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I
’d
certainly
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love
to escape the
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cold
to visit you then!

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Please
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let
me know

Yours
faithfully
,

Adnan

IELTS letter A friend who live in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come Ask him about other times to visit

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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