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you and your family are moving to another country, and have decided to a property agent for assistance. you will say - introduce your self and your family-- describe the type of accommodation you hope to find and give your preference for the location.

you and your family are moving to another country, and have decided to a property agent for assistance. you will say - introduce your self and your family-- describe the type of accommodation you hope to find and give your preference for the location. XB7g
Dear Mr. Smith, My family and I plan to relocate to a new country, and require expert assistance to acquire leased property in the area. Let us start with an introduction, I practice law and will resettle in Istanbul with my lovely wife, Dr. Mounting, and three beautiful children aged 10, 12, and 16. We participate in kayaking, cycling, tennis, and baseball, so we consider ourselves a very active family. Moving on to the heart of the matter, we need numerous factors satisfied with the Istanbul rental property. Without question, we must acquire a two-story villa that possesses, 5 bedrooms, laundry connections, indoor spa, and 3 bathrooms. Besides these attributes, my wife considers herself as a professional gardener, and thus the house should hold a large backyard for agricultural purposes. As Istanbul newcomers, we will lean on your assistance in discovering the perfect neighborhood location. More specifically, we hope you can secure a house in a neighborhood surrounded by kid-friendly parks, facilities for the above- referenced activities, and top-rated schools. Finally, the suburbs present less aesthetic appeal; we prefer and inner-city residence. we hold high expectations and hope you can secure the accommodations for our relocation. Sincere thanks, John Mac.
Dear Mr. Smith, My family and I plan to relocate to a new country, and require expert assistance to acquire leased property in the area.

Let
us
start
with an introduction, I practice law and will resettle in Istanbul with my lovely wife, Dr. Mounting, and three
beautiful
children aged 10, 12, and 16. We participate in kayaking, cycling, tennis, and baseball,
so
we consider ourselves a
very
active family.

Moving on to the heart of the matter, we need numerous factors satisfied with the Istanbul rental property. Without question, we
must
acquire a two-story villa that possesses, 5 bedrooms, laundry connections, indoor spa, and 3 bathrooms.
Besides
these attributes, my wife considers herself as a professional gardener, and
thus
the
house
should hold a large backyard for agricultural purposes.

As Istanbul newcomers, we will lean on your assistance in discovering the perfect neighborhood location. More
specifically
, we hope you can secure a
house
in a neighborhood surrounded by kid-friendly parks, facilities for the above- referenced activities, and top-rated schools.
Finally
, the suburbs present less aesthetic appeal; we prefer and inner-city residence.

we
hold high expectations and hope you can secure the accommodations for our relocation.

Sincere thanks,

John Mac.
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IELTS letter you and your family are moving to another country, and have decided to a property agent for assistance. you will say - introduce your self and your family-- describe the type of accommodation you hope to find and give your preference for the location.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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