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You live in a block of flats, your neighbor makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are affected by this suggest what you want the landlord to do.

You live in a block of flats, your neighbor makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are affected by this suggest what you want the landlord to do. W0Ga
Dear Mr. Smith, I am vikas, and writing this letter to express my seer annoyance towards the hurdles I have been facing for two years since my neighbours are totally annoying. Well I live in the apartment 5B at top floor. Everything is quite there; however, Mr. Arora, my neighbour is a disturbing person. Most of the time he likes to play music on home theatre loudly and some times he himself sing. The decibel of sound is always high and it’s totally unbearable. Moreover, professionally I am teacher, and these days I have to take digital classes since covid pandemic is prevailing. Because of hight pitch of music I am unable to take classes. Furthermore, my mother is sick and she needs rest but these irritating sounds wouldn’t allow to. To cure this, I request you to talk to him about this and direct him to lower the sound upto their walls. Else I allow me to shift in another apartment. Hope for an impartial decision and I am waiting for your prompt decision. Sincerely, Vikas
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am
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vikas
, and writing this letter to express my seer annoyance towards the hurdles I have been facing for two years since my
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.
neighbours
are
totally
annoying.

Well I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in the apartment 5B at top floor. Everything is quite there;
however
, Mr.
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Arora
, my
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.
neighbour
is a disturbing person. Most of the time he likes to play music on home
Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.
theatre
loudly
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
times he himself sing. The decibel of sound is always high and it’s
totally
unbearable.

Moreover
,
professionally
I am teacher, and these days I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take digital classes since
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
pandemic is prevailing.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
of
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hight
pitch of music I am unable to take classes.
Furthermore
, my mother is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
sick and
she needs rest
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
these irritating sounds wouldn’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
to.

To cure this, I request you to talk to him about this and direct him to lower the sound
Possible spelling mistake found.
upto
their walls. Else I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to shift in another apartment.

Hope for an impartial
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
decision and
I am waiting for your prompt decision.

Sincerely
,

Vikas

IELTS letter You live in a block of flats, your neighbor makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are affected by this suggest what you want the landlord to do.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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