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Your neighbors have recently written to you complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter Explain the reason for the noise Apologize Describe what action you will take.

Your neighbors have recently written to you complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter Explain the reason for the noise Apologize Describe what action you will take. 7103
Dear Mrs. Smith, Hope this letter finds you well. I am John Marcel and this letter is in the response of complaint which you made to our society secretary last day. Actually the condition was that, I and my wife want to increase the safety at home and therefore, we have set up number of fire alarms at the each room. For the demo, the experts continuously burns the cigarette and alarm starts ringing and I know the sound level was so terrible even I felt that so. That was the only reason for the loud noise. I apologize to you and your husband, I know he is ill and doctor advised him to take a rest and thus, please accept my apology regards of what happened last day. To resolve this issue now we have decided to off the main plug and only activated when we both will outside or in case of any emergency. I will take care that it will not happen again. Once again sorry for the last day and your inconvenience. Yours truly, John Marcel
Dear Mrs. Smith,

Hope this letter finds you well. I am John Marcel and this letter is in the response of complaint which you made to our society secretary last day.

Actually the condition was that, I and my wife want to increase the safety at home and
therefore
, we have set up number of fire alarms at
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "each" is left.
the each
room. For the demo, the experts
continuously
burns the cigarette and alarm
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starts
ringing and I know the sound level was
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so
terrible even I felt that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
. That was the
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only
reason for the loud noise. I apologize to you and your husband, I know he is ill and doctor advised him to take a rest and
thus
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
accept my apology regards of what happened last day.

To resolve this issue
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now
we have decided to off the main plug and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
activated when we both will outside or in case of any emergency. I will take care that it will not happen again.

Once again sorry for the last day and your inconvenience.

Yours
truly
,

John Marcel
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IELTS letter Your neighbors have recently written to you complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter Explain the reason for the noise Apologize Describe what action you will take.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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