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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you 218o

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Hyderabad and I am not able to find Accessories for my mobile in my city. This letter is regarding the availability of stock for my required products. I am looking for a screen protector and a rear case for my mobile which is Vivo Z1 Pro. Could you please let me know if you have those items in your stock? If they are available, I would like to get a quotation for the same. Since it is a 4 hour journey from here to your city, I can not visit you in week days. I would like to know whether you can hold those items till this weekend? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Kashif Mohammed

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Hyderabad, and
Hyderabad and
 I am not able to find Accessories for my mobile in my city. This letter is regarding the availability of stock for my required products.

I am looking for a screen protector and a rear case for my mobile which is Possible spelling mistake found.VitoVivaVinoVimo
Vivo
 Z1 Pro. Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if you have those items in your stock? If they are available, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a quotation for the same.

Since it is a When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "4-hour"4-hour
4 hour
 journey from here to your city, I can not visit you in week days. I would like to know whether you can hold those items till this weekend?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely


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Kashif
 Mohammed

IELTS letter You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

127 words

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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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