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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you 218o
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Hyderabad and I am not able to find Accessories for my mobile in my city. This letter is regarding the availability of stock for my required products. I am looking for a screen protector and a rear case for my mobile which is Vivo Z1 Pro. Could you please let me know if you have those items in your stock? If they are available, I would like to get a quotation for the same. Since it is a 4 hour journey from here to your city, I can not visit you in week days. I would like to know whether you can hold those items till this weekend? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Kashif Mohammed
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident of
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Hyderabad and
I am not able to find Accessories for my mobile in my city. This letter is regarding the availability of stock for my required products.

I am looking for a screen protector and a rear case for my mobile which is
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Vivo
Z1 Pro. Could you
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if you have those items in your stock? If they are available, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a quotation for the same.

Since it is a
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "4-hour"
4 hour
journey from here to your city, I can not visit you in week days. I would like to know whether you can hold those items till this weekend?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely


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Kashif
Mohammed
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IELTS letter You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you

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  American English
6 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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