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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum; • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work.

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum; • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work. BRla

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in relation to the announcement about recruitment of volunteers for part-time work in the History Museum. I would like to ask you to consider my candidacy for subject work and for this purpose I provide brief information why I believe I am suitable for the said position. I am keen to take this work because I am very passionate about the history in general and like being surrounded by historical things, places and people knowledgeable about the history. This is why, I also participate in various evening courses where I learn about and research the historical events. Let me say that even one of these courses was about preservation and treatment of ancient artefacts which I believe would be useful for my work in your museum. Further to my above motivation, being disciplined, diligent and having excellent soft skills are additional features that the museum could benefit from. Upon your confirmation, I am ready to start next week, but would appreciate at least 2 days’ notice. Looking forward to your answer. Sincerely, John Smith

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 in the History Museum. I would like to ask you to consider my candidacy for subject You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 and for this purpose I provide brief information why I believe I am suitable for the said position.

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 and like being surrounded
 by historical things, places and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 knowledgeable about the history. This is why, I also
 participate in various evening courses where I learn about and research the historical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
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Let
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artefacts
 which I believe would be useful for my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in your museum. Further
 to my above motivation, being disciplined
, diligent and having excellent soft This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 are additional features that the museum could benefit from.

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start
next
 week, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 would appreciate at least 2 days’ notice.

Looking forward to your answer.

Sincerely
,

John Smith