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You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • tell him/her about the gift • tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend • explain why you chose this gift for your friend

You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • tell him/her about the gift • tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend • explain why you chose this gift for your friend W9oD
My Dear friend, How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although, it’s such a short time as we saw each other, but it feels much longer. I would like to let you know that I have just buy a beautiful wristwatch for you when I went to visit Switzerland couple of days ago. It’s a gold plated brown color watch. It has many features like, you can adjust it as per the size of your wrist because it has a flexible chain around. Moreover, you can take shower or you can also go and jump in the pool with this watch because it is a waterproof timer. I would like to send you this wonderful digital watch by courier. For this, I need your current post code and door number. I have select this watch for you by keeping in my mind that, I always found you a regular and punctual in your life. You always give importance to time in your career. I hope you will feel glad to see this amazing watch. See you soon, John
My Dear friend,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although, it’s such a short time as we
saw
each other,
but
it feels much longer. I would like to
let
you know that I have
just
buy
a
beautiful
wristwatch for you when I went to visit Switzerland couple of days ago.

It’s a
gold plated
brown color
watch
. It has
many
features like, you can adjust it as per the size of your wrist
because
it has a flexible chain around.
Moreover
, you can take shower or you can
also
go and jump in the pool with this
watch
because
it is a waterproof timer.

I would like to
send
you this wonderful digital
watch
by courier. For this, I need your
current
post code and door number.

I have select this
watch
for you by keeping in my mind that, I always found you a regular and punctual in your life. You always give importance to time in your career. I hope you will feel glad to
see
this amazing
watch
.

See
you
soon
,

John
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IELTS letter You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • tell him/her about the gift • tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend • explain why you chose this gift for your friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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