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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary work. 1) Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work. 2) Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. 3) Give details of when you would be available for work.

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary work. 1) Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work. 2) Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. 3) Give details of when you would be available for work. NAqj
Dear Sir or Madam, Last week, I come to know about requirement at museum for voluntary or unpaid work from local newspaper. I really want to apply for that task as it is suitable for me. My current office hours are from 9 am to 1; 30 pm and after 2: 00 pm, there are free time for me to do some extra works which are benefited to others. For this reason, I am searching for the same which are quite enjoyable rather than burden for me. I have certain qualities which definitely helpful for museum such as good arrangement and maintenance of the art; moreover, I have 10 years of experience of verbal communication, which can be useful whenever people visit the museum and demonstrate about the things, they ask for. I can join tomorrow onwards and, yes I can also be there on Saturday and Sunday as my current job is of 5 days week. So it would be very grateful for me for doing my interested work and in return I do not want any pay. Please accept my application for voluntary work.
Dear Sir or Madam,

Last week, I
come
to know about requirement at museum for voluntary or unpaid
work
from local newspaper. I
really
want to apply for that task as it is suitable for me.

My
current
office hours are from 9 am to 1; 30 pm and after 2: 00 pm, there are free time for me to do
some
extra works which
are benefited
to others.
For this reason
, I am searching for the same which are quite enjoyable
rather
than burden for me.

I have certain qualities which definitely helpful for museum such as
good
arrangement and maintenance of the art;
moreover
, I have 10 years of experience of verbal communication, which can be useful whenever
people
visit the museum and demonstrate about the things, they
ask for
.

I can
join
tomorrow onwards and, yes I can
also
be there on Saturday and Sunday as my
current
job is of 5 days week.

So
it would be
very
grateful for me for doing my interested
work
and in return I do not want any pay.
Please
accept my application for voluntary
work
.
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary work. 1) Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work. 2) Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. 3) Give details of when you would be available for work.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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