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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. 0r5Q

Dear Sir, I am writing to ask if you have various electrical goods that I want to buy. I have tried shops in my own town, but they don‛t have exactly what I want. I want the new Sony DVD player, a Techniques turntable and a radio with long wave capability. Do you have these items in stock or, if not, will you be able to order them soon? I also need to know what price you charge with these items. If you do have these things, would you be able to hold them for me and for how long? I am free this weekend and, if you have them, I can come over on Saturday morning to pay you and pick them up. Please write back to me as soon as possible at the above address or call me on my mobile number (07364 957 143). I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Peter Jervis

Dear Sir,

I am writing to ask if you have various electrical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 that I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
. I have tried shops in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 town, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they Did you mean "don't" or "don’t"?don'tdon’t
don‛t
 have exactly what I want.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want the new Sony DVD player, a Techniques turntable and a radio with long wave capability. Do you have these items in stock or, if not, will you be able to order them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
? I also
 need to know what price you charge with these items. If you do have these things, would you be able to hold them for me and for how long? I am free this weekend and, if you have them, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 over on Saturday morning to pay you and pick them up.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 write back to me as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible at the above address or call me on my mobile number (07364 957 143).

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Sincerely
,

Peter Possible spelling mistake found.Jarvis
Jervis