Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You received an invitation from your friend to visit their country. Write in your letter, 1. How do you feel about the invitation? 2. Tell when can you go. 3. What do you want to do there?

You received an invitation from your friend to visit their country. Write in your letter, 1. How do you feel about the invitation? 2. Tell when can you go. 3. What do you want to do there? gB5A
Dear Scofield, I hope you and your family are all doing well. I still have fond memories of the time we spent together last year. It felt great to catch up with you and Tancredi, get to know your families and have fun together. It was truly the best! When I was thinking of planning a vacation same as the previous year, I received your invitation and I'm excited to note that we're on the same page. I'm delighted to accept your invite. I wish I could fly there as soon as possible. As you know I'll be busy in the month of April and May since I've to conduct financial audits, it would be great if we fix the vacation at the end of the year. December would be more a convenient month since I can apply for all my unavailed leaves and spend it on my vacation. I always wanted to visit America, and this would a great opportunity to fulfill my desire. There are locations and monuments such as the Statue of Liberty, the Niagara falls and much are in my bucket list. I hope you'll take me there. Hope to see you soon! Warm regards, Sara.
Dear
Scofield
,

I hope you and your family are all doing well. I
still
have fond memories of the time we spent together last year. It felt great to catch up with you and
Tancredi
,
get
to know your families and have fun together. It was
truly
the best! When I was thinking of planning a vacation same as the previous year, I received your invitation and I'm excited to note that we're on the same page. I'm delighted to accept your invite.

I wish I could
fly
there as
soon
as possible. As you know I'll be busy in the month of April and May since I've to conduct financial audits, it would be great if we
fix
the vacation at the
end
of the year. December would be
more a convenient
month since I can apply for all my
unavailed
leaves
and spend it on my vacation.

I always wanted to visit America, and this would a great opportunity to fulfill my desire. There are locations and monuments such as the Statue of Liberty, the
Niagara falls
and much are in my bucket list. I hope you'll take me there.

Hope to
see
you
soon
!

Warm regards,

Sara.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You received an invitation from your friend to visit their country. Write in your letter, 1. How do you feel about the invitation? 2. Tell when can you go. 3. What do you want to do there?

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts