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you recently ordered an item of clothing through a store’s website. When you received it, you discovered that it was the wrong size and color. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, 1.describe the item you ordered 2. explain what was wrong with the item you received 3. say what you would like the manager to do

you recently ordered an item of clothing through a store’s website. When you received it, you discovered that it was the wrong size and color. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, 1. describe the item you ordered 2. explain what was wrong with the item you received 3. say what you would like the manager to do ERlM
Dear Manager, I am writing about a problem with an item I recently ordered from your store's website. I ordered a winter coat, but the one I received was the wrong size and the wrong colour. I think your company should compensate me for the coat as well as my disappointment. Last week, I ordered a winter coat from your website. It was a wool coat lined with silk, and it came in several colors. I ordered it in dark green, size 12. When I received my coat, I was disappointed to discover that the size and the colour were wrong. Your company sent me a bright red coat in size 8. This coat is too small and the color is too bright for me to wear. I would like your company to compensate me for the coat. Please send me another coat in the right size and colour. I think you should also give me large discount on my next order to make up for my disappointment. I hope you agree with my solution to this problem. I look forward to receiving my new coat. Sincerely, Karthika.
Dear Manager,

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ordered
from your store's website. I
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ordered
a winter
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coat
,
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but
the one I received was the
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wrong
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size
and the
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wrong
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colour
.
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I
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think
your
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company
should compensate me for the
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coat
as well
as my disappointment.

Last week, I
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ordered
a winter
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coat
from your website. It was a wool
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coat
lined with silk, and it came in several colors. I
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ordered
it in dark green,
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size
12.

When I received my
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coat
, I
was disappointed
to discover that the
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size
and the
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colour
were
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wrong
. Your
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company
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sent
me a bright red
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coat
in
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size
8. This
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coat
is too
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small
and the color is too bright for me to wear.

I would like your
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company
to compensate me for the
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coat
.
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Please
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send
me another
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coat
in the right
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size
and
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colour
. I
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think
you should
also
give me large discount on my
next
order to
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make
up for my disappointment.

I hope you
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agree
with my solution to this problem.
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I
look forward to receiving my new coat.

Sincerely
,

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Karthika
.

IELTS letter you recently ordered an item of clothing through a store’s website. When you received it, you discovered that it was the wrong size and color. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, 1. describe the item you ordered 2. explain what was wrong with the item you received 3. say what you would like the manager to do

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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