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you recently ordered an item of clothing through a store’s website. When you received it, you discovered that it was the wrong size and color. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, 1.describe the item you ordered 2. explain what was wrong with the item you received 3. say what you would like the manager to do

you recently ordered an item of clothing through a store’s website. When you received it, you discovered that it was the wrong size and color. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, 1. describe the item you ordered 2. explain what was wrong with the item you received 3. say what you would like the manager to do e0eB
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to let you know of my disappointment in having received a wrong order. A week ago, I had ordered a full-sleeved, blue-colored denim shirt of the large size from your online store. On the contrary, what I am now in possession of is not what I had asked for, and, as a result, an item I cannot use. Although the product I received was the same make, the size and the color were incorrect. Not only is this shirt an extra-large, green denim shirt, there is also an atrocious stain on the cuff of the left sleeve. Moreover, some of the stitches around the sides have come undone. Since this is not what I purchased, could you kindly replace the shirt with the one I ordered? If this is not possible, I would appreciate it if you could refund my money. Although, I would prefer the replacement option. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, Karthika.
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to
let
you know of my disappointment in having received a
wrong
order. A week ago, I had ordered a full-sleeved, blue-colored denim
shirt
of the large size from your online store.
On the contrary
, what I am
now
in possession of is not what I had
asked for
, and,
as a result
, an item I cannot
use
.

Although the product I received was the same
make
, the size and the color were incorrect. Not
only
is this
shirt
an extra-large, green denim
shirt
, there is
also
an atrocious stain on the cuff of the
left
sleeve.
Moreover
,
some of the
stitches around the sides have
come
undone.

Since this is not what I
purchased
, could you kindly replace the
shirt
with the one I ordered? If this is not possible, I would appreciate it if you could refund my money.
Although
, I would prefer the replacement option.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours
faithfully
,

Karthika
.
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IELTS letter you recently ordered an item of clothing through a store’s website. When you received it, you discovered that it was the wrong size and color. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, 1. describe the item you ordered 2. explain what was wrong with the item you received 3. say what you would like the manager to do

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  American English
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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