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You would like a temporary job working in the summer camp which will run sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer.

You would like a temporary job working in the summer camp which will run sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. 9YD7x
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Russian national from Moscow and at present, I am studying for bachelor’s degree at the Moscow State University sport management program, where I have been for the last 3 years. I am looking a interim job for summer time while I my lessons started. I would like a outdoor job with young children in different sport activities which you could offer to me. I am master in basketball, football, swimming sports, tennis. Nevertheless, I also was wondering if you could offer to me an office job for management of activities during the day, create the schedule and communicate with stuff. I am 22 years old but I have experience of this kind of job. Year ago I worked in another summer camp like a couch for women football team. The team had success and won the cup. During my educational process, I also have the part-time job as sport manager in University women football team. I organize the local cups, coordinate business sport trips. I am stress-resistance, active, sociable person. In addition, I speak Russian, English, and Spanish. I suppose it can be helpful if your camp is International. I am looking forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, Anna Prokhorova
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Russian national from Moscow and at present, I am studying for bachelor’s degree at the Moscow State University
sport
management program, where I have been for the last 3 years.

I am looking
a
interim
job
for
summer time
while I my lessons
started
.
I
would like
a
outdoor
job
with young children in
different
sport
activities which you could offer to me.
I
am master in basketball, football, swimming
sports
, tennis.
Nevertheless
, I
also
was wondering if you could offer to me an office
job
for management of activities during the day, create the schedule and communicate with stuff.

I am 22 years
old
but
I have experience of this kind of
job
. Year ago I worked in another summer camp like a couch for women football team. The team had success and won the cup. During my educational process, I
also
have the part-time
job
as
sport
manager in University women football team. I organize the local cups, coordinate business
sport
trips. I am
stress
-resistance, active, sociable person.
In addition
, I speak Russian, English, and Spanish. I suppose it can be helpful if your camp is International.

I am looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours
faithfully
,

Anna
Prokhorova
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IELTS letter You would like a temporary job working in the summer camp which will run sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer.

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  American English
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204 words
6.0
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