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Information letter to my friend for his visiting to my home

Information letter to my friend for his visiting to my home g873a
Dear John I am quite excited about your visiting to my house during next holiday. I am fine to have you with me in a few days. Yesterday I recieved your letter. In your letter you asked my home's location, my father said about that we will go for picking you up. I am eagerly waiting to have you at my house and spend some excellant time together. I have planned a few things for us. The first day I planned to rest at our house because I thought you would get tired on the way. My mother will prepare a special meal for you. We go to the cinema the next day. From the day you arrive while a very interesting movie is put there. I will buy tickets for all of us. I am planning lunch in a kitchen that cooks Turkish food. Also please don't forget to take your warm clothes, as you know our weather is too rainy and cool at this time of the year. And I advice to take your camera. Cannot wait any longer to meet you Warm wishes Ann‌‌
Dear John

I am quite excited about your visiting to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
during
next
holiday. I am fine to have you with me in a few days. Yesterday I
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recieved
your letter. In your letter you asked my home's location, my father said about that we will go for picking you up. I am
eagerly
waiting to have you at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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excellant
time together.

I have planned a few things for us. The
first
day I planned to rest at our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
tired on the way. My mother will prepare a special meal for you. We go to the cinema the
next
day. From the day you arrive while a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
interesting movie
is put
there. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
tickets for all of us. I am planning lunch in a kitchen that cooks Turkish food.

Also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
don't forget to take your warm clothes, as you know our weather is too rainy and cool at this time of the year. And I
Did you mean "advise" (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
advice
to take your camera.

Cannot wait any longer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you

Warm wishes

Ann‌‌

IELTS letter Information letter to my friend for his visiting to my home

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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