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Write a complaint letterto express your bad experience when you purchased a good or a survice

Write a complaint letterto express your bad experience when you purchased a good or a survice GWg5B
Dear banana restaurant I am not satisfied with the survival of Staff, so I have to write this letter to complain about this problem. On 20th December, that day is my mother’s birthday, and I celebrated a party for her at this place. However, I was deeply dissatisfied because the low-quality service from the staff’s behavior was horrible. When I came restaurant, the service staff seemed to be tired or something that they did not greet us, not only showing discomfort faced but also leaving me speechless and angry without apologizing for the delayed service. I had to wait more than 1 hour for ordering some dishes. I was furious, and I then went to the receptionist to require the compensation. Unbelievably, they ignored me. Immediately, we left out of there. I hope the manager will consider and change the staff. I think that you had better give this issue your full attention and quickly solve it for me as soon as possible Yours faithfully. Đào Quang Nhân
Dear banana restaurant

I am not satisfied with the survival of Staff,
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so
I
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have to
write this letter to complain about this problem.

On 20th December, that day is my mother’s birthday, and I celebrated a party for her at this place.
However
, I was
deeply
dissatisfied
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because
the low-quality service from the staff’s behavior was horrible.

When I came restaurant, the service staff seemed to
be tired
or something that they did not greet us, not
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only
showing discomfort faced
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but
also
leaving me speechless and angry without apologizing for the delayed service. I had to wait more than 1 hour for ordering
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some
dishes. I was furious, and I then went to the receptionist to require the compensation.
Unbelievably
, they
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ignored
me. Immediately, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
out of there.

I hope the manager will consider and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the staff.

I
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think
that you had better give this issue your full attention and
quickly
solve it for me as
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soon
as possible

Yours
faithfully
.

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Nhân

IELTS letter Write a complaint letterto express your bad experience when you purchased a good or a survice

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  American English
6 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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