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You recently registered for a course, and you cannot atted the class for some reasons. Write abletter to a course instructor.

You recently registered for a course, and you cannot atted the class for some reasons. Write abletter to a course instructor. 7pDlY
Dear professor Moss, I am Ann Hatheway, an undergrafuate student of the department of Electrical and Computer Engineering. At the beginning of this semester, I registered for one of your courses, African Literature and Culture. It is a two-hour course held on every Thursfay afternoon. Yesterday, I received a notice from my departmant that a major course, Comuter Principle, would be changed to Thursday sfternoon. This major course conspicuously influences my cridits and it is very important to me. Unfortunately, I can't study your course this semester. Because of your reputation and my enthusiasm in literature, I hope I could study this course in the next semester. I also heard that another course of yours, China Literature, is held every Friday afternoon. If the registration of this course has not closed yet, I will be so glad to participate in your class. Sorry to bother you, your help will be greatly appreciated. Sincerely yours, Ann Hatheway.
Dear professor Moss,

I am Ann
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Hatheway
, an
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undergrafuate
student of the department of Electrical and Computer Engineering. At the beginning of this semester, I registered for one of your
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courses
, African Literature and Culture. It is a two-hour
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course
held on every
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Thursfay
afternoon. Yesterday, I received a notice from my
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departmant
that a major
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course
,
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Comuter
Principle, would be
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changed
to Thursday
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sfternoon
. This major
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course
conspicuously
influences my
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cridits
and it is
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very
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important
to me. Unfortunately, I can't study your
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course
this semester.

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Because
of your reputation and my enthusiasm in literature, I hope I could study this
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course
in the
next
semester. I
also
heard that another
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course
of
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yours
, China Literature,
is held
every Friday afternoon. If the registration of this
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course
has not closed
yet
, I will be
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so
glad to participate in your
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class
.

Sorry to bother you, your
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help
will be
greatly
appreciated.

Sincerely
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yours
, Ann
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Hatheway
.

IELTS letter You recently registered for a course, and you cannot atted the class for some reasons. Write abletter to a course instructor.

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