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You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the training course you want to do • explain what the company could do to help you • say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with reference to the Scrum Master course which I saw this morning in local newspaper. Basically, I was looking for this certification from quite long. Primarily this course helps in developing project execution and interpersonal skills. As this program is expensive around 2000 Dollars including study material and certification fee, due to scarcity of teachers in this field. I would not be able to afford full fees due to my poor financial condition. I would appreciate if organization can pay 50 percent of this amount which is 1000 Dollars and rest will be managed from my savings. The curriculum in course will help in developing agile and rapid methods to solve complex problems, which i encounter in daily problems while dealing with customers. This will be eventually help in solving complex problems in faster and effective way. Please let me know in case you require more information on this matter. I look forward hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Saurabh Gulati
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with reference to the Scrum Master course which I
saw
this morning in local newspaper.
Basically
, I was looking for this certification from quite long.
Primarily
this course
helps
in developing project execution and interpersonal
skills
.

As this program is expensive around 2000 Dollars including study material and certification fee, due to scarcity of teachers in this field. I would not be able to afford full fees due to my poor financial condition. I would appreciate if organization can pay 50 percent of this amount which is 1000 Dollars and rest will
be managed
from my savings.

The curriculum in course will
help
in developing agile and rapid methods to solve complex problems, which
i
encounter in daily problems while dealing with customers. This will be
eventually
help
in solving complex problems in faster and effective way.

Please
let
me know in case you require more information on this matter.

I look forward hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Saurabh
Gulati
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IELTS letter You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the training course you want to do • explain what the company could do to help you • say how the course will be useful for your job

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6.0
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