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You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain your situation. 2. Say why you feel unsure about living in the city. 3. Ask some questions about life in the city.

Dear Janne, Hope you are in good health. You will be happy to know that I recently secured a job offer in Canada, Waterloo region as a Software Tester. They have assured me a good pay and and initial accommodation for two weeks. Although I am happy about the job but I am confused if I can manage well in a new country as you are aware I haven’t been to a foreign country miles away from my family which might make be feel homesick. Adding to this one thing that worries me is the cold and harsh winters of Canada. There are few more questions in my mind. Since I will be coming in winters what precautions would you suggest for clothing? Will I manage to find an accommodation? What will be the rent? Also are there any places to visit on weekends? I would have ample amount of time on weekends to visit new places. I appreciate your taking the time to answers my questions and I am aksed to join in company in next 4 months, so i have time to think about this offer and if i accept it we can meet soon. Best wishes, Akshata.
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, Hope you are in
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health. You will be happy to know that I recently secured a job offer in Canada, Waterloo region as a Software Tester. They have assured me a
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pay
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initial accommodation for two weeks. Although I am happy about the job
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if I can manage well in a new country as you are aware I haven’t been to a foreign country miles away from my family which might
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be feel homesick. Adding to this one thing that worries me is the
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and harsh winters of Canada. There are few more questions in my mind. Since I will be coming in winters what precautions would you suggest for clothing? Will I manage to find
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an accommodation
? What will be the rent?
Also
are there any places to visit on weekends? I would have ample amount of time on weekends to visit new places. I appreciate your taking the time to answers my
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questions and
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about this offer and if
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accept it we can
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IELTS letter You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain your situation. 2. Say why you feel unsure about living in the city. 3. Ask some questions about life in the city.

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200 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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