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You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain your situation. 2. Say why you feel unsure about living in the city. 3. Ask some questions about life in the city.

Dear Janne, Hope you are in good health. You will be happy to know that I recently secured a job offer in Canada, Waterloo region as a Software Tester. They have assured me a good pay and and initial accommodation for two weeks. Although I am happy about the job but I am confused if I can manage well in a new country as you are aware I haven’t been to a foreign country miles away from my family which might make be feel homesick. Adding to this one thing that worries me is the cold and harsh winters of Canada. There are few more questions in my mind. Since I will be coming in winters what precautions would you suggest for clothing? Will I manage to find an accommodation? What will be the rent? Also are there any places to visit on weekends? I would have ample amount of time on weekends to visit new places. I appreciate your taking the time to answers my questions and I am aksed to join in company in next 4 months, so i have time to think about this offer and if i accept it we can meet soon. Best wishes, Akshata.
Dear
Janne
, Hope you are in
good
health. You will be happy to know that I recently secured a job offer in Canada, Waterloo region as a Software Tester. They have assured me a
good
pay
and and
initial accommodation for two weeks. Although I am happy about the job
but
I
am confused
if I can manage well in a new country as you are aware I haven’t been to a foreign country miles away from my family which might
make
be feel homesick. Adding to this one thing that worries me is the
cold
and harsh winters of Canada. There are few more questions in my mind. Since I will be coming in winters what precautions would you suggest for clothing? Will I manage to find
an accommodation
? What will be the rent?
Also
are there any places to visit on weekends? I would have ample amount of time on weekends to visit new places. I appreciate your taking the time to answers my
questions and
I am
aksed
to
join
in
company
in
next
4 months,
so
i
have time to
think
about this offer and if
i
accept it we can
meet
soon
. Best wishes,
Akshata
.
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IELTS letter You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain your situation. 2. Say why you feel unsure about living in the city. 3. Ask some questions about life in the city.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
200 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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